{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"12474685","dateCreated":"1243521844","smartDate":"May 28, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"fidan1993","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/fidan1993","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235147613\/fidan1993-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12474685"},"dateDigested":1532767381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comments","description":"i liked your story, its short and down to the point.
\nI also agree with you on living life one day at a time and not planning your day's.
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\nBut I\u2019d much rather live dangerously that predictably.
\nBut I\u2019d much rather live dangerously than predictably.
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\n:] good job","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12009059","dateCreated":"1242142474","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"DrewGauvain","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DrewGauvain","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237994231\/DrewGauvain-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12009059"},"dateDigested":1532767381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"this essay made me think alot about what i do when i wake up. it made me think back to what i even did this morning. it is a very interesting topic to write about. besides some grammatical errors it was well written.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12008027","dateCreated":"1242141623","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12008027"},"dateDigested":1532767381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"Very interesting message. I liked the way you presented the problem of living predictably and how that leads to dullness. This was a good lesson but I know I for one could not live like that all the time so I admire you for living like that. If we all lived like that maybe we could solve some of the problems in our world today","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006865","dateCreated":"1242140532","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dsk23","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dsk23","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006865"},"dateDigested":1532767381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment ","description":"
\nI agree with this belief. You can't hang onto the past and can't write your future before it happens. Nice concept. Work on deleting some repitive statesments. It seems like you use "go with the flow" alot, which is your title and main belief. So try cutting them out so its not as repetitive.
\nFor example, this is a bit repetitive of what your previously talked about in the opening paragraph
\n"I like waking up every morning having no clue about my day and where it will bring me."","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006657","dateCreated":"1242140229","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"wihbeyj","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wihbeyj","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006657"},"dateDigested":1532767381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"I liked this essay. As soon as you said "I like to live dangerously" I immediately thought of Austin Powers. I was surprised by how the essay went from a seemingly light and happy essay to a more purposeful and deep one. It just kind of shocked you.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006411","dateCreated":"1242139924","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"oliviah15","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/oliviah15","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222128529\/oliviah15-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006411"},"dateDigested":1532767381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"This is a very interesting perceptive. I never really thought about that, and in some ways it is true because i am more predictable and dthat can be boring. I really enjoyed this","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12005693","dateCreated":"1242139296","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"etreb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/etreb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12005693"},"dateDigested":1532767381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"
\nPositive: This topic is very thought provoking and something that I would like to be able to do one day. You had many good ways of saying things like "You have to go with what you're dealt".
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\nNegative: I thought it ended rather abruptly and I would have liked to see you add more to this. Since it was so well written it would have been benefical to keep it going.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12005467","dateCreated":"1242139122","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Shayna_Jenkins","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Shayna_Jenkins","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1224158020\/Shayna_Jenkins-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12005467"},"dateDigested":1532767382,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"The idea of going with the flow was very creative one. The vocabulary throughout it was excellent. But, I do feel that it was a bit short and parts of it could have been elaborated on.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12005097","dateCreated":"1242138857","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dimariad","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dimariad","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12005097"},"dateDigested":1532767382,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"this was really good. relating your parents divorce with going with the flow probably wasnt an easy task, but you did it very well","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12004867","dateCreated":"1242138641","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"desiree377","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/desiree377","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12004867"},"dateDigested":1532767382,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"This was really well written and I completely agree with this. I liked you're dealing cards metaphor at the end. Other then a few grammer\/spelling mistakes, such as,
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\n"But I\u2019d much rather live dangerously that predictably."
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\n'that' should be 'then', this was really good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}