{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"12139863","dateCreated":"1242399490","smartDate":"May 15, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"fidan1993","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/fidan1993","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235147613\/fidan1993-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12139863"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"As mature I feel sometimes, I realized that I don\u2019t want to have those any of those responsibilities yet. It made me realize that I should enjoy my youth instead of anticipating adulthood.
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\nAs mature AS I feel sometimes, I realized that I don\u2019t want to have those ( don't need this) any of those responsibilities yet.
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\nI agree with your belief :]
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\nand i like how you incorporated a little about your family members as examples","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006451","dateCreated":"1242139957","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"DrewGauvain","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DrewGauvain","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237994231\/DrewGauvain-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006451"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"i think you are exactly right. sometimes it seems like older people are rushing us to be more mature. i figure i only have one life to live so why not have the best time i can. this was an awesome way of explaining this. this is a topic i think about all the time and i am glad you chose to write about it.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006303","dateCreated":"1242139791","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006303"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"I liked this story and all that it represented. It is very true that youth is something we never get back. However, I think many will agree with me when I say that the generalization of we are all imature at this age is very wrong. Many people grow up very quickly making them very mature even at their somewhat unadvanced age. Also I have never known anyone who thought loving their childhood was in any way selfish. The overall message was very good just try to not make such broad generalizations.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12005409","dateCreated":"1242139077","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"kaygeo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kaygeo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12005409"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"I really enjoyed reading this. The concept is just so appealing. I, too, believe in being young. Your story had great insight and you made it very personal.
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\nI did spot some spelling\/grammatical errors, but those can easily be fixed with a little re-reading.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12005283","dateCreated":"1242138979","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"wihbeyj","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wihbeyj","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12005283"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"I completely agree. I thought it was a good topic to write about. Youve got to live life to the fullest. Your only problem was that you had a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Just go through and fix all of that.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11905087","dateCreated":"1241796908","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dsk23","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dsk23","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11905087"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"This concept was also really appealing and I can totally relate you your belief. As kids, we all look foward to growing up and the perks that come with it but once you're there, you realize how much you should appreciate your youth. I wish I realized that at a young age. Good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11904367","dateCreated":"1241796003","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"oliviah15","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/oliviah15","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222128529\/oliviah15-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11904367"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comments","description":"THis had a lot of good insight and i enjoyed your point of view on it because in many ways you are right. THe only correction i would make would to be reread and watch your grammar and sentence construction. Great Job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11902547","dateCreated":"1241794010","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"tylerjlhs","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/tylerjlhs","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11902547"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"i agree 100% with your story! trying to feel young for as long as possible throughout your childhood is not selfish in any way. the childhood of ones life helps to form you as a person for later, plus you create some of the best memories... you did a really good job relaying your message that it is alright to act young, feel young, and enjoy it altogether.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11901767","dateCreated":"1241793152","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"etreb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/etreb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11901767"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"Positive: I like how you stated your belief at the very beginning of your story, which elimated the possibility of confusion. I also liked how well you tied this story in to your own life. It was very satisfying to read of a belief that envolved you so deeply.
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\nNegative: The only thing I would have liked to see was that you elaborated on things more and just expaned the essay as a whole more. More detail would have been much appricated.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11901467","dateCreated":"1241792879","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"desiree377","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/desiree377","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11901467"},"dateDigested":1532767391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"This was personal and that really drew me in. The only mistakes you made was the tense kept changing.
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\n"I was sick of my ideas being ridden off as na\u00efve because I don\u2019t agree with what my parents believe."
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\n'Don't' would work better as 'didn't' or 'was' as 'am'.
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\nOther then that this was really well done.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}