{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"12138943","dateCreated":"1242398396","smartDate":"May 15, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"desiree377","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/desiree377","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12138943"},"dateDigested":1532767405,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"I loved reading this. Destiny is a strong thing to believe in and you gave good reasoning for believing in it. I also loved your connection to the Wizard Of Oz. This was well done, good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12043969","dateCreated":"1242218254","smartDate":"May 13, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"kaygeo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kaygeo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12043969"},"dateDigested":1532767405,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments ","description":"This was a very inspirational story. I really liked how you chose to write about destiny.. such a good topic. Your story really flowed and that made it very easy to read. You really explained your ideas. Great job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12008437","dateCreated":"1242142042","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"wihbeyj","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wihbeyj","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12008437"},"dateDigested":1532767406,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"Your story really got me thinking because i dont normally believe in destiny. The story about the car was crazy. I couldnt believe it. Overall I thought the story was very good and you explained your ideas well.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12008421","dateCreated":"1242142035","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"oliviah15","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/oliviah15","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222128529\/oliviah15-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12008421"},"dateDigested":1532767406,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"I really enjoyed this piece. It was so true and inspirational. I really enjoyed it. There is not much else to say!!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006925","dateCreated":"1242140596","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dimariad","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dimariad","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006925"},"dateDigested":1532767406,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"that was really intresting. like about the car accident thing, and you were totally right the "it was meant to be" answer. i didnt see any grammatical or messed stentances so good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006777","dateCreated":"1242140414","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Shayna_Jenkins","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Shayna_Jenkins","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1224158020\/Shayna_Jenkins-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006777"},"dateDigested":1532767406,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"I lilked how you began the story with the definition. It erased any confusion about what you believe. I was kind of confused by the story about the truck, maybe that could be explained more clearly??","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12006775","dateCreated":"1242140413","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"etreb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/etreb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006775"},"dateDigested":1532767406,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"Positive: I really liked the flow of the story. You also had a lot of crucial points and beliefs in the story that really got me thinking about destiny and how I really feel about it.
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\nNegative: The only negative thing saw was that you need to narrow in on one "This I Believe" topic as opposed to many different ones and then expand on this.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"12139441","body":"this piece made me think about the things that have happened to me in my life and determine if they have happened for a reason. looking back i agree with you that every thing has.
\ni agree with etreb that this piece did flow very well. transition was easy between thoughts and i was never confused. the link back to your life did a good job of supporting your belief.","dateCreated":"1242398913","smartDate":"May 15, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"DrewGauvain","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DrewGauvain","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237994231\/DrewGauvain-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}