{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"12006929","dateCreated":"1242140597","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"fidan1993","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/fidan1993","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235147613\/fidan1993-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12006929"},"dateDigested":1532767410,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"I LOVED this story!
\nIt's so true, and i agree with every point made.
\nI also like how you included a quote and the link to the dictionary at the end, clever :]","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12005431","dateCreated":"1242139099","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"DrewGauvain","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DrewGauvain","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237994231\/DrewGauvain-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12005431"},"dateDigested":1532767410,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"When i read this it seemed like something i would have written. dedication is what brings you to the top through the toughest times. this has been drilled into my head since i was a young kid.
\nWhen i said that it seemed like something i would write it would be bragging becuase i could never get my thoughts down as clear and forceful as you did in this. the way you describe dedication is like no other and it was an absolutly perfect way to explain it. not many people consider the hours of work people go through to be sucessful at something. this story showed that completely.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12004707","dateCreated":"1242138527","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"wihbeyj","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wihbeyj","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12004707"},"dateDigested":1532767410,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"I thought the ending was great. It was an excellent way to close your story. It was very well written. I also believe in dedication. One part of your story didnt go well though. In the beginning you talked about how you dont believe in love, but then you talk about how you listen to your sister and her bad singing voice but you dont tell her to stop. Isnt that love?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"12004565","dateCreated":"1242138376","smartDate":"May 12, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"kaygeo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kaygeo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/12004565"},"dateDigested":1532767410,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments ","description":"I really enjoyed reading this. It made me question what I believe in as I was drawn into your work. I found it very thought provoking. I like how you built your story up by first listing things you didn't believe in.
\nThe only part I found to be confusing was whether or not you believe in determination or dedication. You switched back and forth:
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\n"But, most of all, I believe in dedication."
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\n"I searched the true meaning of determination.."","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11904777","dateCreated":"1241796606","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11904777"},"dateDigested":1532767410,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"THis was a pleasure to read. It was well put together and very reasonable but at the same time it was also very invigorating and inspirational. Great job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11902999","dateCreated":"1241794472","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"oliviah15","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/oliviah15","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222128529\/oliviah15-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11902999"},"dateDigested":1532767410,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"WOW","description":"This was amazing it just makes me want to go out and run a marathon without any practice. You made it really easy to understand what you were trying to say and to be able to relate at the same time. There honestly isn't much else to fix to me anyway!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"11904733","body":"I agree with Olivia very inspiring and very well done. You really put heart into this and it is obvious. AWESOME!","dateCreated":"1241796547","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"11901171","dateCreated":"1241792650","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"etreb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/etreb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11901171"},"dateDigested":1532767411,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"Positive: I really thought you raised many good points in your story and it really got me thinking of what I actually believe. Like you saying you didn't believe in things like love, really got me to question if I do too. So all in all, very thought provoking.
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\nNegative: I was kind of confused if your topic was on determination or dedication. You started off talking about many different believes and ideals you shared and then you finally mentioned your belief of dedication. But, at the end of your story you were talking about determination so I was kind of confused throughout it.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11901151","dateCreated":"1241792638","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"etreb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/etreb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11901151"},"dateDigested":1532767411,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"Positive: I really thought you raised many good points in your story and it really got me thinking of what I actually believe. Like you saying you didn't believe in things like love, really got me to question if I do too. So all in all, very thought provoking.
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\nNegative: I was kind of confused if your topic was on determination or dedication. You started off talking about many different believes and ideals you shared and then you finally mentioned your belief of dedication. But, at the end of your story you were talking about determination so I was kind of confused throughout it.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11803239","dateCreated":"1241623929","smartDate":"May 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"desiree377","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/desiree377","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11803239"},"dateDigested":1532767411,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"I really liked the begining. Saying what you didn't believe in was a great way to build up to what you do believe in. Excellent job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"11901977","body":"i agree with desiree in how you did a fantastic job building up what you dont believe in, to what you do. it really made the story interesting and helped it to flow better. good job!","dateCreated":"1241793356","smartDate":"May 8, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"tylerjlhs","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/tylerjlhs","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"11802767","dateCreated":"1241623472","smartDate":"May 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dimariad","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dimariad","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11802767"},"dateDigested":1532767411,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"that was so good. i really liked how you started with what you didnt believe in and lead up to what you believed in. and i thought it was great how you put in an example of something that you are determined in.
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\nbut i thought it was strange that you said you dont believe in love becauase you've never been in love. when you dont need to be in love to know what it is. throughout your story i noticed examples of love like "how giving everything for someone or something is the biggest gift there is" and there were other ones too.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}