{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"11700741","dateCreated":"1241449128","smartDate":"May 4, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"claire2849","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/claire2849","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11700741"},"dateDigested":1532767438,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comments","description":"I love the idea of rewriting a bit of holocaust history.  Overall I thought this story had a great combination of suspense, action, and pieces of the religious elements of that history.  The one thing I wished was different was that the reader didn't really know anything about Mengele.  All we know is that he is tempermental and probably smart, but we don't know why he is driven to follow the stranger's plan or betray it in the end and take all the power for himself.  I wish the story included more about Mengele that would have explained his actions later.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11526445","dateCreated":"1240931876","smartDate":"Apr 28, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11526445"},"dateDigested":1532767438,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"That was VERY well written. The whole idea of the plot was genius. I really liked that you didn't linger too long on how the guy from the future got there, just that he got there and gave them the guns. The idea of how power corrupts was very well used. I thought this was well thought out and written. Well Done!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"11526507","body":"also just the idea that changing hiostory could have been worse by trying to fix it was awesome to","dateCreated":"1240931916","smartDate":"Apr 28, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"11431813","dateCreated":"1240587258","smartDate":"Apr 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"fidan1993","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/fidan1993","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235147613\/fidan1993-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11431813"},"dateDigested":1532767438,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"AHHHH, Josef Mengele, interesting guy! <br \/>\nCreepy and all,<br \/>\nI really liked it !","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11346125","dateCreated":"1240414416","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dimariad","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dimariad","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11346125"},"dateDigested":1532767438,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"whats a reich?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11346109","dateCreated":"1240414398","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"kaygeo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kaygeo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11346109"},"dateDigested":1532767439,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"This story was very creative and I really enjoyed it. It was well thought out and very interesting. I never expected the ending, and I liked how the story was written.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11344429","dateCreated":"1240412416","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"desiree377","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/desiree377","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11344429"},"dateDigested":1532767439,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"I enjoyed reading this, the idea was really creative and obviously well thought out. <br \/>\nI am familiar with Josef Mengele's experiments, so it confused me as to why he was the one approached and the one who killed Hitler. It happend very quickly and some parts were confusing. If you clean up those areas this story will be fantastic. The plot line is so interesting.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"11343115","dateCreated":"1240410728","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Shayna_Jenkins","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Shayna_Jenkins","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1224158020\/Shayna_Jenkins-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11343115"},"dateDigested":1532767439,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"The idea for this story was very creative, and I never would have expected him to take power at the end. The idea of Mengele taking power over Germany during World War II also created new questions in my head to what would have happened. I do feel that it is very unrealistic that he would have listened to Jewish person telling him what to do. I would consider changing the religion or having Mengele not realize that the person is a Jew.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"11343293","body":"I agree with Shayna about Mengele not realizing that the person is Jewish because he wouldn't have listened to him.  Also, i feel like the story was a bit vague and rushed through.  I would maybe try cutting something out and then showing some after affects of what Mengele is going to do.  However besides that i thought the idea of someone killing Hitler and taking care of Germany themselves was very interesting.","dateCreated":"1240410997","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"oliviah15","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/oliviah15","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222128529\/oliviah15-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"11343461","body":"I agree with Shayna. i didnt realize until I read her comment that the person was jewish.<br \/>\nI thought it was so good. there was really good word choice. when the person came to mengele i thought he was going to stop everything instead of taking over. so that was really suprising.","dateCreated":"1240411280","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dimariad","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dimariad","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"11343471","body":"i agree with shayna that the fact that he would have listened to a jewish person makes it a little less unrealistic. but the unexpected climax at the end really made the story a good one. the topic of religion is a huge, wide topic and you turned it into a good story of a hero. well done. it was very different and interesting.","dateCreated":"1240411294","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"tylerjlhs","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/tylerjlhs","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"11344153","body":"I also agree that Mengele would not have listened to the man. Despite the fact that he was Jewish. I am not an expert on the man but I don't think he would listen to a man he didnt know. The story was a great read. I enjoyed not knowing what would happen next. I was confused at first by the new line of weapons but I figured out where it came from after rereading.","dateCreated":"1240412056","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"DrewGauvain","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DrewGauvain","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237994231\/DrewGauvain-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"11344181","body":"It was very stated that the man was in fact Jewish, nor was it implied. But I do agree, if that was the case then it would have been most unusual.","dateCreated":"1240412109","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"etreb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/etreb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"11345053","body":"never*","dateCreated":"1240413141","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"etreb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/etreb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"11345051","body":"I agree with Eamon. It was never said that the man was Jewish, just that Mengele thought he was. But I think that the trust he had in the mystery man was a little strange. Why would he listen to someone that he doesn't even know, and to kill his party's leader? But this story was so original and interesting, if you just fix those few things then it will be phenomenal.;","dateCreated":"1240413141","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"allie4522","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/allie4522","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237993324\/allie4522-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"11527549","body":"Great exchange, everybody!!","dateCreated":"1240932706","smartDate":"Apr 28, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mcgoldrickj","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mcgoldrickj","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256220354\/mcgoldrickj-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"11343027","dateCreated":"1240410562","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"wihbeyj","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wihbeyj","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/11343027"},"dateDigested":1532767440,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"I liked the idea. I thought it was really cool. I thought the ending was sick, how you said It has begun in German. That was a nice touch. I didnt get this one part:  Papers went flying everywhere, with wood chips filling the air. Whats up with the wood chips? This was when the soldiers killed all of the nazi officials. I liked all of the action incorporated.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}