{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"10515818","dateCreated":"1237992253","smartDate":"Mar 25, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/10515818"},"dateDigested":1532767487,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"Very good story. Th plot was excellent and the vocab was also very good:&quot;Piece of heaven&quot;. Overall very well writtten but you might want to work on some sentence structures","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9902782","dateCreated":"1236348670","smartDate":"Mar 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"tylerjlhs","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/tylerjlhs","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9902782"},"dateDigested":1532767487,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"setting story 4","description":"i really liked how you place the story in an area near here. you did a great job with the setting of the story, but the fact that others have actually been there and can picture it, it makes it much more dramatic for some. i thought that this story also flowed very nicely, but a few areas were a little wordy. otherwise, good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9689130","dateCreated":"1235849598","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"katieob","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/katieob","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9689130"},"dateDigested":1532767487,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment Story 04","description":"You described the campground very well. I felt as if I was there again. - I used to go camping at Lone Oak frequently. =) <br \/>\n<br \/>\nBut, I was a bit confused with the ending of the story. Maybe some additional information about &quot;the friend&quot; would make it less ambiguous.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9515754","dateCreated":"1235492026","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"kaygeo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kaygeo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9515754"},"dateDigested":1532767487,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"This story was very descriptive of the setting, so descriptive that seconds into reading it, I could easily picture Lone Oak even though I have never been there. You explained this place very well and organized your story very well. There are some places where the wrong verb tense is used and fussy little grammatical errors. Great story!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9515612","dateCreated":"1235491850","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"colangeloc","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/colangeloc","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1238686036\/colangeloc-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9515612"},"dateDigested":1532767487,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Setting Story 4","description":"This story shows how much you love this place and enjoy visiting each year. <br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nYou should add some interesting events that happen at this campsite","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9515506","dateCreated":"1235491739","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"claire2849","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/claire2849","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9515506"},"dateDigested":1532767488,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"I like that the easy pace of this story conveys a sense of relaxation that is usually associated with summer. It is a peaceful story that is easy to read, but I wish the ending was more explanatory. It almost felt like the real story was about to start after the ending and that the entire story until that point was just an introduction.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9512638","dateCreated":"1235489640","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"desiree377","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/desiree377","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9512638"},"dateDigested":1532767488,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"Your story is really discriptive, I've been to Lone Oaks and your story makes me feel like I am back there. Your story is also well put together. But you might want to add a little action or a plot that will make the reader want to keep reading.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9512510","dateCreated":"1235489543","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"DrewGauvain","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DrewGauvain","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237994231\/DrewGauvain-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9512510"},"dateDigested":1532767488,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments Story 4","description":"The story was very descriptive. I could easily relate                to where you where you were and the setting. I could completely       understand how important the place was to you. Your descriptions painted a great picture. <br \/>\nThere were a few spelling and grammar errors. I would have liked it better if you could explain the friend at the end. Also if you described each day more. Other wise, an extremely descriptive story.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9511942","dateCreated":"1235489091","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dsk23","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dsk23","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9511942"},"dateDigested":1532767488,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment ","description":"<br \/>\nYour story was filled with details and descriptions of the senses. I didn't feel as if there was a real plot though. You might want to expand on the ending about the mysterious friend or include it throughout your story to add interest. Other than that, I really enjoyed the setting and how it makes you feel relaxed.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9422922","dateCreated":"1235184665","smartDate":"Feb 20, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dimariad","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dimariad","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9422922"},"dateDigested":1532767488,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"Possitive:  You described it so well. I've been to Loan Oaks tons of times so I could picture it perfectly before but, all of your details fit the way i remembered it too.  and it has a lot of personality in it.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nNegative:  there were a few spelling or grammer mistakes but, that happens.  and some better word chose for things like 'lots' would be a good idea","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}