{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"9786410","dateCreated":"1236129570","smartDate":"Mar 3, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"fidan1993","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/fidan1993","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235147613\/fidan1993-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9786410"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments","description":"I really enjoyed your story, especially the ending!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9689090","dateCreated":"1235849272","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"katieob","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/katieob","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9689090"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment Story 03","description":"I loved this story - full of emotion, and very descriptive. The ending was my favorite. =)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9616746","dateCreated":"1235664523","smartDate":"Feb 26, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mmcferran","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mmcferran","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9616746"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"that was VERY well done.
\nit was like a real published story. Perfect plot, no overexagerations and definit etime and effort.
\nonly comments
\n1. adreneline filled my bloodstream just sounds a little awkward.
\n2. massive amount of water works. you might wanter just change that to something like I knew if I opened my mouth the water works would start ....or something like that
\nOver all GREAT story!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9515034","dateCreated":"1235491249","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"claire2849","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/claire2849","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9515034"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"I love this story! I found basically no faults with it: the writing is very mature, the story moves at a good pace, and the plot line is attention grabbing. Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9514970","dateCreated":"1235491189","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"colangeloc","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/colangeloc","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1238686036\/colangeloc-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9514970"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Setting Story 3","description":"Awesome description of your emotions. A very sweet love story.
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\nYou should fill in the reader more about the ending and what ends up happening with Ruby and Theo all summer","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9513350","dateCreated":"1235490059","smartDate":"Feb 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mgfabbri","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mgfabbri","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9513350"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"I really like this story, I love how it shows romance in young people. All of the discription was really well thought out. It really makes me want to be apart of the story.
\nThough the ending seemed really rushed, overall i think this was an excelent story.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9422770","dateCreated":"1235184138","smartDate":"Feb 20, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dimariad","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dimariad","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9422770"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comment","description":"Positive: when your describing how she feels and the settings was really good. and it was absalutly adorable
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\nNegative: a lot of seemed really rushed, a few more sentences about what happend with Theo would've done a lot of good","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9404146","dateCreated":"1235147639","smartDate":"Feb 20, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"dsk23","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dsk23","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9404146"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"Your story was really cute.I would describe their relationship a little more in the beginning to establish it clearer. You might want to expand more when they were sitting under the tree playing guitar and such. Other than that, the story was sweet!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9403884","dateCreated":"1235147356","smartDate":"Feb 20, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"desiree377","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/desiree377","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9403884"},"dateDigested":1532767490,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comment","description":"I really enjoyed reading this. Each sentence that I read made me want to read more. The scene at the end when he tells her he loves her was adorable! One thing that you could change would be extending the end of the story; it seemed really rushed.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"9403792","dateCreated":"1235147243","smartDate":"Feb 20, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"DrewGauvain","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DrewGauvain","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1237994231\/DrewGauvain-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sem2creativewriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/9403792"},"dateDigested":1532767491,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments: Story Three","description":"Positive: This one really had me hooked. I am never the kind of kid for a love story, but I truly enjoyed this one. The way you described your emotions was the best. Your descriptions of the setting painted a perfect picture.
\nNegative\/Constructive: It would help to describe the relationship with Theo prior to when this occured. Also, at the end when he tells you that he did not have a girlfriend,it went to fast. A longer explanation would make me understand more.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}